Sunday, 17 May 2015

Observational writing


It Feels really prickly
 when you touch it.

It is smooth on the outside piece 
of what pricks you.

It is the shape of a cone.

It smells like a lot of pine trees 
Bunched together.

It hurts when someone throws
it at you.

If it wasn't called a pinecone then I would call it a prickly cone.

It is Jagged on the edges .
It has a rough stalk.

1 comment:

  1. You used some great descriptive words. I like jagged, and rough, they made me imagine the pine cone in my mind when you were describing it.