Monday, 16 May 2016

Camp writing

Hanmer hot pools 

The nice life guards tell us some understandable rules. 
The slippery hydro slide over loads the water bucket. 

The massive water bucket trips giving overpowered impact.

The hot pools invite me in. 

The relaxing lazy river comforts me because the jets on the side of the walls pull my body through the strong current.

The lazy people drift in the pool.

The funky lizard slide pulls me down the slippery tongue.

Stinky hot pools make me feel disgusted because of the horrible smell.

1 comment:

  1. You used lots of fun detail and it felt like I was there.